科技與日常生活（核心論段和結(jié)尾）

　　It’s well-known to us and all around us that technology is playing an increasing role in the improvement of our life. The first and foremost aspect that should be highlighted here is that ,As a matter of fact,tectnology makes our life more convenient.Nowaday,almost all of us are enjoying the modern transportation and telecommunication based on the tachnology..

　　Dr. Zhang,a famous antropologist at TsingHua university,pointted out “The standard of our living as well as the society has been promoted by the leap of technology”.what’s more,it is the modern medical system and remedy which are evolved from technology that ,in a broad sense,keep people physically stronger.According to a recent suvey by the average life span of humen- being has rised to 79.1(胡亂編造得), from 60 because of technology.One more point,though not conclusive yet,that can never be overlooked is that our life are been enriched considerablelly for the application of technology to the realm of recreation. As can be seen everywhere,people now find spiritual fufillment by playing computer games and by surfing on net.

　　All in all,20 century had wittnessed a series of technical explosion.From a long-term of view,so vital is technology to our life that we should lay much more emphasis on exploring it.

　　以上節(jié)選自MBA論壇，一培訓(xùn)學(xué)員的作文。我仔細(xì)看了下感覺有曹老師弟子的影子。順便回憶下曹老師的作文課精要（系統(tǒng)一），與大家一起分享。要下班了，今天晚上繼續(xù)完成這個(gè)貼。

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　　眾所周知，科技在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用。首先也是最應(yīng)當(dāng)被強(qiáng)調(diào)的是：事實(shí)上，科技使我們的生活更加方便。人們現(xiàn)在正在享受著以科技為基礎(chǔ)的交通和通訊手段。

　　清華大學(xué)的教授張兵教授是一位著名的人類學(xué)家，他曾指出“科技的飛躍推動(dòng)人類生活水平和社會(huì)的進(jìn)步”。其次，源于科技的現(xiàn)代醫(yī)療手段和醫(yī)療體系使人們更加健康。根據(jù)中國日報(bào)的調(diào)查，因?yàn)榭萍嫉脑颍藗兊钠骄鶋勖蟠筇岣摺?。還有一點(diǎn)，雖然這一點(diǎn)還未有定論，但永遠(yuǎn)不應(yīng)被忽略，即：因?yàn)榭萍紤?yīng)用于娛樂，使人們的生活變得更豐富多彩。正如到處可以看到的，人們通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)和電腦游戲找到了精神上得滿足。

　　總之，20世紀(jì)見證了一系列得科技大爆炸。從長遠(yuǎn)得角度來說，科技是如此得重要，以至于我們應(yīng)該在未來更加重視發(fā)展它。
1)debate
a)sideA +sideB（就是分別說出Ａ和Ｂ的觀點(diǎn)），比較陳舊的一種
b)topic+side Ｉ
第二種就是總結(jié)一下話題，然后說出自己的觀點(diǎn)．例如有些大學(xué)生已經(jīng)結(jié)婚，有些大學(xué)生正準(zhǔn)備結(jié)婚，我認(rèn)為．．．．．．
my view(support or oppose)
sth is of great value and meaning and import(是支持）如果表示反對就將great---little value---harm, meaning---disadvantage

2)graph
a)描述數(shù)據(jù)的變化
１）變化很大２）表現(xiàn)在那，漲跌情況,注意一頭一尾３）數(shù)字表達(dá)能力（cite data)
表示增加的詞匯（程度依次增強(qiáng)）growsoar iseskyrocket
表示減少的詞匯（程度依次增強(qiáng)）dropfalldeclinedescend
動(dòng)詞修飾　gradually emarkablydramaticallyshaply
動(dòng)詞后介詞to
from......to

3)cartoon
漫畫的意圖主要有三種諷刺（satirize)＼啟發(fā)(inspire)娛樂（entertain)(一般不考）
social phenomenon--------negative or life philosophy
主要弄清楚漫畫元素對應(yīng)的象征意義（metaphor)比喻
他以漫畫（圓型跑道上一個(gè)人，起點(diǎn)也是終點(diǎn)）為例子[FS:PAGE]
track比喻life ,runner比喻anyone,endless比喻success.比喻人生的一個(gè)成功接著要面臨（new taskchallege)終點(diǎn)也是起點(diǎn)

推薦使用的句子結(jié)構(gòu)
１）it structure(13的句子要用）形式主語（dummy subject)
i love you應(yīng)該表達(dá)為
１．it is you who i love
2.when day breaks and night falls, i love you
3.if you love me .i love you
4.i love you because there is no bodyelse i can love
5.I loveyou so much that i can not live without you

2)it+系表＋that(to+v)
it is quite obvious for us that s+v
it goes without any question that
it is said that
it is pointed out by the authorities that
it is 狀語　that s+v

3)倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（inverted stucture)
s+v+0(adv)------only+ adv+ 助動(dòng)詞＋s+v+o
for example: i love you yesterday=only yesterday did i love you so much do i love you that i can not live without you

4)插入語(自由使用）
Ｉ，as it is, love you
as it is =to tell the truth=to be
frank=in a broad sense

5)so ....that...
the picture is so vivid that i can not help tempted to take another look
=so vivid is the picture that

6)as is well -known
as far as I am aware(據(jù)我所知道）

再看看前面那篇文章，真的很像曹門弟子的文章．　
以上是曹老師講課的主要內(nèi)容，寫出來以作自己復(fù)習(xí)，同時(shí)希望能給其他精華網(wǎng)考友分享．